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The Locket I walked down a dusty path covered with decaying leaves and tree branches.
I noticed the fog in the air and in hushed tones a voice inside my head kept telling me "don't look back." The cemetery reminded me of myself as a child witnessing my grandmother on her death bed and the grief and gloom it brought in to all of our eyes. I was forced to walk in between the tomb stones as the path narrowed and eventually ended. At that moment, I realized and thought to my self, this is the reason why I never take this way home. The awful picture in my mind of the graves and the curiosity of what lays beneath them. Usually, I find that I can snap out ofThe Locket by ~Avzi

Writers Block I wasn't looking forward to history class. We had to type an essay about Napoleon. I sat at the computer, stared into space and listened as the sounds of the keyboards took over. It agitated me that I was the only one not typing. I began working, and an hour later I was finished! I never liked history, I was much better at English. I entered English class where the cheerful Ms.Bedard taught us. I looked forward to it, as she'd always have literary exercises for us.

Today, she wasn't at her desk; ordinarily, she was there, peppy and smiling. She told us how much she loved our writing and what a wonderful class we were. With uncertainty, I sWriters Block by ~Avzi

The City Act I The City: Act I

ISABELLA: [ steps out of the taxi with bags and walks towards apartment building as she walks up to the front desk] Hello there, Mr...[searches for name tag] Dwayne?
I'm Isabella Rose, I called last night to confirm my arrival at the front desk.

MR. DWAYNE: Oh, Isabella... Hello! We have the keys to your room. The water should be working as well as the heating. Your boxes and belongings have also arrived, when would you like to pick them up from the storage hallway?

ISABELLA: My boyfriend should be coming by in 30 minutes to help me get settled so we'll arrive together.

MR.DWAYNE: Okay, that sounds like a planThe City Act I by ~Avzi

The city Act II [Bella walks towards couch and sits down curled up in a blanket]

ANDREW: [sighs in frustration] Isabella, please come back here.

[ignores him and casually sits back on the couch staring into space]

ANDREW: [walks over to the couch and pins her hands back while on top of her]
Please listen? I just wanted to explain one thing--

ISABELLA: Explain what...? I don't see how that was a problem for you... to just TELL ME where you were going. Now get off of me.

ANDREW: [ignores her demand] But do you see why I didn't? Do you see that if I did, then you would instantly react just as you did and try to talk me out of going?

ISABELLThe city Act II by ~Avzi

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The Power of Remembrance Dirt rained around the many people as gun shots went out all over the place. The weight of the gun depressed me, yet it also comforted me. At least with it on me, I had a greater chance of surviving.
'That's not true. So many have already lost their lives, even with their guns in hand…' I hardly ever listened to my conscience, but it was true. I had lost so many friends to this war. Whom would I bury today? Josh? Gordon? Mark? Or would one of them bury me? I stared uselessly into the distance, trying to detect some of the German soldiers. When I didn't find any within ten seconds I positioned my gun, and shot aimlessly in the general dThe Power of Remembrance by ~Kimeru92

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May 23, 2011, 11:39:39 AM by ~Avzi
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I'm posting a few things I've worked on in class...
such as my play and another one i worked on with a friend, just a silly one for kicks.

The first is a dramatic comedy I wrote with a friend in class.. its ironic and funny. Not meant to be serious:

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This is my so far two act play.... its called " The city" I hope you enjoy, and read both! It is mostly about the fashion world and relationships... meant to be a drama/romance

Act I:
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Act II:
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They call me Avi, It's short for Avital. One of my biggest fears would be commitment, if i cant trust someone to love me the most they can, and cherish my attention. I enjoy writing poetry and Photography.. in any shape or form. This way I can just get my feelings out and not bottle it up, or hide my feelings behind a mask.

I am very outgoing I've been told.. if you get to know me i can be very loud and funny. On the other hand, i state my mind whenever needed, and let people know how i feel about something that bothers me. I try to make friends through being truly real and not fake, i can't stand people who lie about their identity,pics,info etc.

Please visit my profile and enjoy my photography and poetry.. leave a comment i love to hear what anyone has to say about it.

Enjoy! xo

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!Aysaya Sep 23, 2010

Thank you for the face, Miss. c:

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I agree to disagree with the worlds opinions.

!Aysaya Sep 23, 2010

THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO SAY FAVE.
:I

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I agree to disagree with the worlds opinions.

~Avzi Oct 22, 2010

ohh haha! no problem , yeah i was wondering for a while LOL.

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~CoffeFlavordBitch Jan 14, 2010

hey avi, are you good with photoshop ?

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"I am surrendering to the gravity and the unknown
Catch me...
heal me...
lift me back up to the sun
I choose to live"

~Avzi Jan 17, 2010

no im not, sorry.. i dont have the program. Like i've had experience with it but not much

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